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This week I thought I’d share with you a post that I saw on Fantasy Faction. As you’ve probably guessed it’s about how to turn ideas that you’ve brainstormed into stories with developed plots and characters. The approach the author of the post uses is explained using an example of a floating city and it was very interesting, at least to me, to see that idea develop a lot just within the article. It could also be fun to brainstorm how many other ways that particular idea could have gone after you read the post as well. All in all, I really recommend reading How Ideas Become Stories on Fantasy Faction even if you are more of a reader than a writer. It can be interesting to think about what might of been the core idea that prompted your favorite stories or what could be missing from stories that you didn’t like as much.
Please let me know if you have any questions and feel free to comment about how you develop ideas into stories or anything else related to the topic. I hope you all have a good week!
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This week I thought I’d share a post by one of my favorite websites, Fantasy-Faction. The post is about creating a fantasy race and it breaks doing so into five areas: physical characteristics, point of view, civilization, interaction, and purpose. I believe it does a good job to help create unique and fleshed out races which can be helpful if you want to have more than the standard races (humans, elves, dwarves, etc.) in your story. It can also be helpful if you want to think about the standard races in a new way. So I hope you all also find it interesting and beneficial.
Here’s a link to the post: Creating a Fantasy Race
Please let me know if you have any questions and feel free to post your thoughts on this topic in the comments below. I hope you all have a great week!
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First of all I’d like to apologize for posting late this week and I thought I’d share a fun, helpful video by one of my favorite vloggers, Jenna Moreci. In the video she’ll talk about her top 10 villain pet peeves and what makes them so terrible. To mention some of the villains that she talks about and that I definitely agree with her opinion about are: the cartoon villain, villain who doesn’t really do anything, chatty villain, femme fatale, and the bad guy who sucks at being the bad guy.
Here’s the link: 10 Worst Villain Pet Peeves
I hope you all enjoy the video and let me know if you have any questions!
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Lately, what I’ve been reading seem to have many a character that are Mary Sues–or in other words, a character that can do whatever they want when they want to do it. Mary Sues, to me, are basically walking, talking deus ex machinas. And about as disappointing, because as a reader you expect the characters to struggle in order to achieve their goals and with both of those there is no struggle. They take the impact and thus the meaning out of the story, and most often this is most obvious at the story’s climax. As I’m sure you know and have experienced the climax of a story is when all the tension and questions about what will happen in the story comes to a head and you get to see that tension and those questions get resolved. Often times when you look back on a well written climax it seems as if there was no other way for it to be written–everything in the story was leading up to and hinting at it happening just as it did. Often there is no build up to a deus ex machina. So when a writer takes the easy way out of by implementing deus ex machina–either by using a Mary Sue or some event–the reader often feels cheated and/or disappointed. Please don’t make your readers feel that way.
There is really only one key thing you need to remember to help make sure they don’t feel that way: limits make characters (and stories) interesting. When I talk to other readers and writers the things they seem to remember most about their favorite characters is what they couldn’t do instead of what they could do. Granted, people also seem to remember and the love the moments best when those characters found ways around or overcame their limits, but there is a difference between that and simply bypassing limits or not having any limits in the first place. The former includes struggle and the later does not. The former is defined by the limits the characters face and the later focuses on results. Results are well and good, but depth and how believable the journey was to get those results are also important. Mary Sues and other deus ex machina take away that chance to build depth and believability which is why they so often leave readers feeling disappointed/cheated.
I understand that you can write yourself into a corner, but when that happens just take a step back and try to find the thing that is making a solution impossible without using a godlike character or a random event. Then rewrite that thing so that a solution is still difficult, but no longer impossible. It’ll probably take some editing, but doing so is worth keeping the story believable and interesting and true to the parameters (limits) it’s already established. I also understand that writing a Mary Sue can be tempting. I’ve definitely written one before and it can be fun to have a character who is all powerful, but in the end I found out that the story and the character were a lot more interesting when I gave them limits/weaknesses. I had to come up with creative solutions to problems instead of making it as if they never happened, and that created tension and interest in what was going to happen next.
To put it succinctly: people tend to put more stock into something they worked for rather than something that was handed to them, and that goes for solutions to problems in stories as well.
Thank you for reading and feel free to post your thoughts on this topic in the comments. Please let me know if you have any questions and I hope you all have a great week!
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So this week I’m going to share a guest blog post that another writer wrote specifically for my blog. James Bee seems like a pretty cool person and you can check out his bio at the bottom of this post. As you’ve probably guessed the blog post is going to be about character motivation and why it’s important. So without further ado here you go:
On the Importance of Proper Character Motivation
Guest blog post by James Bee
Characters are the driving motivation behind the majority of novels. Obviously there are exceptions to this rule but on the whole I think it holds true. Most plots centre around them and the actions that they take. The readers spends the whole book seeing things through their eyes, reading about what they do and the effects that those actions have.
Thus character’s motivations and how they drive them to interact with the plot and the world around them are extremely important for the writer to get right. Making sure your character’s motivations make sense and are logical is vital. Otherwise their actions won’t make sense and everything will fall apart around them. This is something that I struggled with early in the novel I’m currently writing. I knew how the plot would unfold and how the characters would fit into it, but I didn’t know why. And until I knew that, it was impossible to get my head around the book.
Motivations drives action which drives the plot. Characters must have good reasons for doing what they do, or at least logical ones. Their actions must follow from their motivations. Always ask yourself why is a character doing something? Do they have a good reason? These reasons can come from anywhere, backstory, desires, belief systems, they just have to be logical and compelling.
If not, then you can run the risk of breaking the immersion for the reader or having the book start to unravel. Nothing is more frustrating as a reader than when character’s you’ve become invested in start making decisions or doing things that don’t make any sense or aren’t consistent. It can completely ruin the enjoyment of a novel. Therefore, making sure that your character’s motivations are in order is of the utmost importance!
Writer Bio: James Bee is a novelist and blogger working out of Vancouver, Canada. He’s the author of two fantasy novels with more on the way! You can follow him on twitter @jameslikesbooks or follow him on his blog at https://jamesreads.blog/!
Please feel free to post your ideas on this topic in the comments and let me know if you have any questions! I hope you all have a great week!
“What would it be like if the plants weren’t trying to eat us every day?”
“Too boring for words.”
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For those of you who are writers like me I thought it would be good to share how I battle writer’s block every week. I think of myself as a fairly busy person, especially during the school year, between classes, a part-time job, clubs, studying, and keeping in contact with friends and family as well as having this blog. There would be a lot of times when I would use that busyness as an excuse not to write because I was too tired, should interact with people, eat regular meals–in short, do actual things, things that would garner immediate results. But writing is an actual thing and does garner actual results such as being closer to finishing the manuscript I’m working on. I just had to accept the fact that I needed to put the effort in to do the thing I loved doing, even when it was difficult and writer’s block was staring me in the face.
So I started writing story sections and sending them out every week to friends and family who would be willing to read them. Most people say not to share what you are currently writing with others but, for me, doing so gave me the kick I needed to start writing regularly. I knew I had to send something out every week because they were expecting to receive a story section. There was no room for excuses: either I sent one out or I didn’t. An added bonus was that for those readers who have the time and are willing I also get feedback as I’m writing which helps me know what I need to work on as I write (another thing I know people advise against, but it means instead of having to edit and overhaul something once I finish the whole manuscript I can do it right then and keep having it fixed). Now I aim for at least 2,000 words a week and send out questions about each section for those readers who want to answer. They aren’t really beta readers but I have found their advice does help as well as simply being accountable to send out the story section. Since I’ve started doing this I think I’ve only missed sending out the story sections twice in almost a year.
If following the traditional advice hasn’t been working for you feel free to try this out or do something completely different. One thing that doing the story sections has reminded me of is that while the traditional advice can be helpful, it doesn’t work for everyone, and if it doesn’t work for you, you don’t have to follow it. They aren’t rules, only guidelines.
Please let me know if you have any questions and feel free to comment below. If anyone would like to receive the story sections let me know and I can get it arranged. I hope you all have a good week and thanks for reading!
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Lately, I’ve been reading the Last Herald-Mage series by Mercedes Lackey (whose interesting books I would recommend by the way) and her writing and characters have reminded me that characters–like real-life people–can have conflicting emotions. Sometimes when I’m writing I’m so focused on what the character is supposed to feel or how they are going to react that I find I forget that they can conflicting emotions. Having conflicting emotions can make them feel more like actual people and tie in other parts of the story to the scene you’re writing. No scene or dialogue is in a vacuum which means the emotions driving that scene or dialogue can’t be located in one either. People feel lots of different things at once about different things and more than likely they will feel those things at the same time.
Having conflicting emotions can also help with character development and motivation. It can help the reader know what is more important to the character based on what they are having conflicting feels about and what emotion they end up acting upon. A character who really wants a book but won’t go get it because they are afraid of the adult standing near it, and a character who really wants a book but doesn’t get it because they are worried about their financial situation are two very different people. The result is the same, but emotional impact and knowledge of the character is very different. Also, if the reader is told the character wants a book but doesn’t end up getting one without another emotional reason as to why the scene feels unfinished, lackluster, or confusing.
You don’t have to use conflicting emotions all the time but making use of them can make your story feel more cohesive and flow better. It can also break up the monotony of a character only being driven by one emotion–something that becomes unrealistic quickly and that becomes boring. Conflicting emotions can also point to internal vs external conflicts and pressures in the story.
I hope this post helped and let me know if you have any questions. Feel free to post your thoughts or anything you think I missed in the comments. I hope you all have a good week!
First line prompt:
She had always thought she would get a pet, but she hadn’t expected it to be a stuck up porcupine who found trouble easier than a cat catches a mouse.
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This week I thought I’d talk about including ceremonies and holidays in fiction becuase of Memorial Day. Whenever I see a ceremony/holiday included in a story–whether in a passing comment or actually making an impact on the plot–it always seems to make the world the story is set in more immersive.
People celebrate, they mourn, and usually at some point during the year in an actual culture both things are recognized in the form of a holiday. Whether that means celebrating a new year or remembering the dead cultures set aside times to let people break away from their daily lives. How that gets manifested and what gets deemed important enough to get a holiday can provide great insight into a culture and the people belonging to it. They can also help show the divides between people if different cultures are mixed together and don’t celebrate the same things or different ways. Holidays also help show the passing of time in a story and that the story isn’t being told in a vacuum–there is a larger world that this story is a part of and is affected by.
Ceremonies can also be good to include or mention, becuase they can also help show what is important to a culture and add more depth to worldbuilding. They help mark things that don’t always happen annually but are still important to a society such as becoming an adult, getting married, and reaching a certian point in education or religion. Depending on what is emphasized during a ceremony will also reveal things that culture values, which could be anything from honor to cunning to being a certain gender.
Holidays and ceremonies give something for characters to look forward to and talk about as well as showing their values and how well they might know a culture. It makes the worldbuilding more believable and immersive. Though that isn’t to say that you should just include a holiday/ceremony without any rhyme or reason. Both are shaped by culture and so they must fit into the culture to make sense and add to the world.
Feel free to post any comments if you have anything to add or think I missed something, and let me know if you have any questions! I wish you all happy reading and writing. 🙂